Vox Calamantis In Deserto Declaratio
A Declaration
The following is my Declaration, my Voice, on the troubled times we are in.
I pray for You all.
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When in the course of human events we allow the weakest to rule, and fall into the traps and lies of the devils with the shiniest objects and Godless glimmers of false promises, we rightfully will receive all the Hell that befalls those without principle enough to sacrifice daily their comforts to keep such wolves of wickedness chained up in appropriate cages. Those without desires to act, or futilely think the Devil will allow them merely to plead their case and decide their case has the greater merit, are self-deluded in thinking a system suddenly sane and their principles provide the sole key to their escape from Devils. Only through physical battle, and the mental capacity to outwit a sly demon, can one ultimately defeat and bind up the hands of the greatest Evils and hope others will assist in the War perilously now at hand.
I respect the great work you do, so here are my constructive criticisms.
Don't start with that line unless you really think that you've produced something rivaling the importance of its original use.
If you want to reach a broader audience you could choose less religious vocabulary.
Other than that I like it.