A Declaration
I respect the great work you do, so here are my constructive criticisms.
Don't start with that line unless you really think that you've produced something rivaling the importance of its original use.
If you want to reach a broader audience you could choose less religious vocabulary.
Other than that I like it.
Its an echoing mechanism. The work is the work.
One started that immediately with --- it would be Folly...
The above is not in the work shared. It was in an email I wrote to share it.
I respect the great work you do, so here are my constructive criticisms.
Don't start with that line unless you really think that you've produced something rivaling the importance of its original use.
If you want to reach a broader audience you could choose less religious vocabulary.
Other than that I like it.
Its an echoing mechanism. The work is the work.
One started that immediately with --- it would be Folly...
The above is not in the work shared. It was in an email I wrote to share it.