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"tendency towards run-on sentences. I think in run-on sentences"

I am the same exact way. I hated short, choppy sentences in papers. I will give your chapter one a read during lunch.

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I have already found more errors! LOL....made some minor corrections. I am not an editor.

https://jasonpowers.substack.com/api/v1/file/0c0db097-bcc1-421e-9a99-afd90a0562da.pdf

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I used to have to read my graduate school papers, four or five times. Even then, I rarely caught every one of my errors.

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https://jasonpowers.substack.com/api/v1/file/0c0db097-bcc1-421e-9a99-afd90a0562da.pdf

Updated. AND thank you again! Im getting thirsty again!

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